Tide Within
#1
Beyond the shadow of doubt
Lies more sinister thought
An inner taking of oneself
From what seems inside out
Pressure too well withheld
And kept deep in some well
Rising up just to drown us
Quell reluctance and excel
#2
Beyond the shadow of doubt
Lurks overwhelming thought
Diminishing our confidence
From what seems inside out
Pressure too well withheld
And kept deep in some well
Rising up just to drown us
Quell your wave and propel
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