Marcus Crane Poet Haiku

Tidal Waves With No Threat

traveling through air 

these tidal waves show no threat 

seen nor to be heard 


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i can't bother what ppl say about me .. i am me 
not gone change .. so these words willl just go by my ears .. as the air moves it with it

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Sara Kendrick September 21, 2009 at 3:36 AM Interesting thoughts put to pen. Thanks for your comments on my work. My poem about the Weeping Willow was about more than what it seemed you are right on. Keep writing. Sara---Like the concept that I received from this one but it never hurts to listen to others say and then make a choice as to whether to use the advice they give.

Raul Moreno September 19, 2009 at 4:35 PM Nice message, I concur with this. Nice work...Raul