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Tidal Waves With No Threat

traveling through air these tidal waves show no threat seen nor to be heard ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- i can't bother what ppl say about me .. i am me not gone change .. so these words willl just go by my ears .. as the air moves it with it

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Date: 9/21/2009 3:36:00 AM
Interesting thoughts put to pen. Thanks for your comments on my work. My poem about the Weeping Willow was about more than what it seemed you are right on. Keep writing. Sara---Like the concept that I received from this one but it never hurts to listen to others say and then make a choice as to whether to use the advice they give.
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Date: 9/19/2009 4:35:00 PM
Nice message, I concur with this. Nice work...Raul
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