Tid Bit

blew me a wet kiss
isolated state of bliss…
telekinesis

lovesenryu

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Andrea Dietrich

March 8, 2011 at 12:19 AM

NICE!!! How are you,Robb. It's LATE here!

Carolyn Devonshire

March 7, 2011 at 2:37 PM

Very cool senryu, Robb. You have given birth to a whole new appreciation for rhyming haiku on Poetry Soup. Hats off to you for creating a new trend. I'm glad you liked "Should I" but it didn't place in the contest for which it was written. I think I need to stick to humor. When I try to write about love, I never get it right. Best wishes, Carolyn