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blew me a wet kiss isolated state of bliss… telekinesis

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/8/2011 12:19:00 AM

NICE!!! How are you,Robb. It's LATE here!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/7/2011 2:37:00 PM

Very cool senryu, Robb. You have given birth to a whole new appreciation for rhyming haiku on Poetry Soup. Hats off to you for creating a new trend. I'm glad you liked "Should I" but it didn't place in the contest for which it was written. I think I need to stick to humor. When I try to write about love, I never get it right. Best wishes, Carolyn

Wilma Neels

Date: 3/7/2011 1:40:00 PM

Robb, what a brilliant senryu, ending my day with a smile after reading this.. :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/7/2011 1:13:00 PM

Telekinesis nicely defined unforced love to create bliss, Robb