Ticks

Between ticks of eternal clock, I hushed a lifetime of perception.



3rd in 1427 Monoku Line Contest by Brian Strand

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Andrea Dietrich

December 3, 2025 at 8:45 AM

Back with my congrats. Way to go, Jenish

Jenish Somadas

December 3, 2025 at 11:21 PM

Thank you Andrea..

Terry Miller

December 1, 2025 at 8:12 AM

A reflection on how we guard, erase, or redefine our perception within the unrelenting march of moments, congratulations

Jenish Somadas

December 1, 2025 at 9:48 PM

Thank you Terry...

David Crandall

November 30, 2025 at 9:11 PM

Hmm, I guess a lifetime is just a tick in eternity - nice monoku!

Jenish Somadas

November 30, 2025 at 10:26 PM

Thank you David

Christine Watts

November 30, 2025 at 7:58 PM

Hi Jenish, A clever Monoku and makes on think on life's paths Congratulations Cheers Christine

Jenish Somadas

November 30, 2025 at 10:26 PM

Thank you Christine..

Andrea Dietrich

November 30, 2025 at 1:02 PM

Outstanding

Jenish Somadas

November 30, 2025 at 10:25 PM

Thank you Andrea..

Maclawrence Famuyiwa

November 30, 2025 at 5:06 AM

I love its rhythm. Nice one Jenish and congrats.

Jenish Somadas

November 30, 2025 at 5:27 AM

Thank you Maclawrence..

Sara Kendrick

November 30, 2025 at 4:13 AM

Congratulations on your winning work in Brian's contest. Way to go. Delightful work. Sara K

Jenish Somadas

November 30, 2025 at 5:26 AM

Thank you Sara..

Sara Kendrick

November 30, 2025 at 4:04 AM

Jenish, I don't know if this one placed or not because I have not looked at the list. I will drop back with congratulations if it did. I think it was a good contender though. Thank you for sharing it with us. Sara K