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Tickles Her Nose

She sits in her garden surrounded by love amongst glorious creatures sent from heaven above the birds in the air that sing a sweet song bring a feeling she's wanted, that she does belong the butterflies are dancing in the warm autumn light kissing the sun rays in the midst of their flight the wind on her cheek is holding her near soothing her troubles, her worries, her fears she bends down to take in the scent of a rose the soft smell of beauty tickles her nose entranced in the moment, she sits there and smiles forgetting the world, if just for a while

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 12/7/2015 7:50:00 PM
Oh, I've been away from your talent too long. I've enjoyed reading you and I've always had trouble keeping up with everyone - one could easily spend all day here. Your poem is wonderful. A moving and enthralling write, Tim - also another 7 ...CayCay
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Date: 11/25/2015 3:20:00 AM
enjoyed this different tune for you, tim... seize the moment!..huggs
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Date: 11/25/2015 2:46:00 AM
- Lovely and charming poem, Tim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/25/2015 1:54:00 AM
the soft smell of beauty tickles her nose : )..So love this line. I can picture a lady who is very happy if only for a moment.Love love this.A fave.
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Date: 11/24/2015 7:18:00 PM
This is great Tim. Thanks for illustrating a magic moment in autumn light.
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Date: 11/24/2015 6:26:00 PM
this is lovely, tim! i really enjoyed it...
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/24/2015 6:36:00 PM
thanks Ilene
Date: 11/24/2015 5:16:00 PM
Enchanting write, Tim! 7
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/24/2015 5:20:00 PM
Thanks Eve
Date: 11/24/2015 5:07:00 PM
charming write TiM:-) hugs Jan xx7
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/24/2015 5:10:00 PM
Thanks Jan

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