Tim Smith Poet Rhyme

Tickles Her Nose

She sits in her garden surrounded by love
amongst glorious creatures sent from heaven above 
the birds in the air that sing a sweet song
bring a feeling she's wanted, that she does belong
the butterflies are dancing in the warm autumn light
kissing the sun rays in the midst of their flight
the wind on her cheek is holding her near
soothing her troubles, her worries, her fears
she bends down to take in the scent of a rose
the soft smell of beauty tickles her nose
entranced in the moment, she sits there and smiles
forgetting the world, if just for a while

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CayCay Godwin December 7, 2015 at 7:50 PM Oh, I've been away from your talent too long. I've enjoyed reading you and I've always had trouble keeping up with everyone - one could easily spend all day here. Your poem is wonderful. A moving and enthralling write, Tim - also another 7 ...CayCay

Nette Onclaud November 25, 2015 at 3:20 AM enjoyed this different tune for you, tim... seize the moment!..huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen November 25, 2015 at 2:46 AM - Lovely and charming poem, Tim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charmaine Chircop November 25, 2015 at 1:54 AM the soft smell of beauty tickles her nose : )..So love this line. I can picture a lady who is very happy if only for a moment.Love love this.A fave.

Done Posting November 24, 2015 at 7:18 PM This is great Tim. Thanks for illustrating a magic moment in autumn light.

Ilene Bauer November 24, 2015 at 6:26 PM this is lovely, tim! i really enjoyed it... Tim Smith November 24, 2015 at 6:36 PM thanks Ilene

Eve Roper November 24, 2015 at 5:16 PM Enchanting write, Tim! 7 Tim Smith November 24, 2015 at 5:20 PM Thanks Eve

Jan Allison November 24, 2015 at 5:07 PM charming write TiM:-) hugs Jan xx7 Tim Smith November 24, 2015 at 5:10 PM Thanks Jan