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Alesia Leach

Date: 5/23/2025 5:42:00 PM

This poem teases with rhythm and texture--cheeky and layered. “So many colours on You” pops like a wink mid-verse, and the closing “It’s fine relax” adds just the right sly touch. Light bondage with poetic flair.

Beata Agustin

Date: 2/21/2025 4:06:00 AM

Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.