Kylie Arello Poet I do not know?

Ticking Patter

pit-pat
pit-pat
rain drops on this roof
pit-pat
pit-pat
a tear rolls down my face
pit-pat
pit-pat

piter-pater
piter-pater
feet run through the house
piter-pater
piter-pater
trying to wake you up
piter-pater
piter-pater

tick-tock
tick-tock
waiting for that time
tick-tock
tick-tock
the time talks to me
tick-tock 
tick-tock

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Carol Sunshine Brown August 11, 2010 at 9:49 AM What wonderful poetry I am reading today and so diverse. I have not read a bad poem yet today. I am enjoying reading each and everyone from old poets and new poets alike. Lots of amazing contest entries also. Thank you for sharing yours with us today Kylie. Love, Carol

Harry Horsman August 10, 2010 at 9:36 PM interesting imagery this, well thought out, love it . Harry

Poet Destroyer A August 10, 2010 at 9:31 PM ohh,, with the tick- tock builds my suspense lol,, enjoyed your write..P.d.