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Ticking Patter

pit-pat pit-pat rain drops on this roof pit-pat pit-pat a tear rolls down my face pit-pat pit-pat piter-pater piter-pater feet run through the house piter-pater piter-pater trying to wake you up piter-pater piter-pater tick-tock tick-tock waiting for that time tick-tock tick-tock the time talks to me tick-tock tick-tock

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/11/2010 9:49:00 AM

What wonderful poetry I am reading today and so diverse. I have not read a bad poem yet today. I am enjoying reading each and everyone from old poets and new poets alike. Lots of amazing contest entries also. Thank you for sharing yours with us today Kylie. Love, Carol

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/10/2010 9:36:00 PM

interesting imagery this, well thought out, love it . Harry

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/10/2010 9:31:00 PM

ohh,, with the tick- tock builds my suspense lol,, enjoyed your write..P.d.