Ticking Away

Life is a clock quickly ticking away
Every second you lose is time lost in dismay
Jupiter's omnipotent hand shall light the way
Let Athena grant lasting lucidity's sway

Minuscule moments let your life drain today
Mars' violent stand will provoke more delay
Don't lay waiting for Apollo's next ray
Flee from Death's darkness down Hades' way.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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July 15, 2011 at 12:37 PM
awesome..
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June 29, 2011 at 4:19 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Beth. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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June 28, 2011 at 8:44 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoy the site as I have enjoyed reading your creative poetry tonight luv..
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