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A rhyming poem in story form.

Tick Tock Went the Clock

He slashed his wife's neck
To get the insurance check
The evidence was thin
There was a slim chance he might win
I watched the accused
He looked somewhat amused
As his lawyer whispered to him in his ear
The outcome was clear
The courthouse was still
Surrounded by the old bill 
The verdict was handed over to the Judge
The lawyer gave the defendant a nudge
He stood up in the dock
And kept his eye on the clock
Quarter past ten
Suddenly mayhem
As he was released
No justice for the deceased.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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July 9, 2014 at 12:31 AM
Brigitte, Congratulation, on having your poem featured on the soup's home page. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
Alhemaidy Avatar
July 8, 2014 at 5:32 PM
Bless you! True nice reading.
Glans Avatar
July 7, 2014 at 10:30 PM
Great write!
Mcconnell Avatar
July 7, 2014 at 4:33 AM
great piece of work Brigitte, really liked this with great imagery and rhyme, God bless, Gordon
A   Avatar
May 21, 2014 at 10:18 AM
Brigitte, WOW... this is not the way life should be... Gripping imagery... Linda
D. Avatar
May 21, 2014 at 10:03 AM
such a true story written over and over again.
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