Tick Tock

You’re forty and still alone
You sit there and wonder where this all went wrong
Living a lie and smiling through it
Cant hide the pain, you got used to it
Wearing a mask but honey nobody is fooled
Staring at the crumbled castle you once ruled
Oh how you wish the clock would turn
Oh how you wish you could set fire to the memories and watch them burn
Gave up seventeen years of your life for him
Now your view on life is so grim
Wishing and wishing upon a star
It’s too late your chance is gone
The clock still tick, ticks on
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Lamoureux Avatar
December 5, 2017 at 9:02 AM
What a nice thing to say, thanks.
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December 1, 2017 at 9:25 AM
Thanks for visiting this morning. I wrote a piece a while ago called “Broken People”.You might enjoy it. If you go to the top of this page there is a search box. Type the title and it shoulld direct you to the piece.
S. Avatar
December 5, 2017 at 4:46 AM
I read it a few minutes ago. I haven't disliked any of your poems and I don't I think I ever will because they are all so beautifully written and so full of emotion <3
Lamoureux Avatar
November 30, 2017 at 8:56 AM
Last line consider “The clock still tick ticks on...” it rhymes with gone and some how finishes the piece. I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning. Welcome to the soup. Do drop by you might enjoy some of my writing.:0)
S. Avatar
December 1, 2017 at 7:28 AM
You're right, it does sound better. Thank you for the help and I'd love to check out some of your writing <3
Sharma Avatar
November 25, 2017 at 9:59 AM
"living a lie and smiling through it" this line is all over my head. and yeah its actually what everybody do and get used to it. Love it. Enjoyed it. Felt it.
S. Avatar
December 1, 2017 at 7:38 AM
Thank you <3
Babbit Avatar
November 7, 2017 at 2:00 PM
Enjoyed this, but never give up, love waits, just around the turn of the clock, tick tock.
S. Avatar
November 8, 2017 at 1:20 PM
Thank you ! <3
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