Abdulhafeez Oyewole Poet Rhyme

Tiara In Her

This picture I pick is not her own,
It could be for a bimbo or a night trig. 
This picture with me is not her own,
It could be for a sissy or a bleaching wig.
This picture I hold is not her own,
It could be for a lousy or a neglected lass.
This picture with me is not her own,
It could be for a demon or a girlie class.

This picture I pick is no doubt her own,
It's obvious in her spotless face and her passionate grin.
This picture with me is really her own,
It's obvious in her modest crown and her sincere chin.
This picture I hold is no doubt her own,
It's obvious in her ideal stroll with her gorgeous rose.
This picture with me is really her own,
It's obvious in her charming blouse and her classy pose.

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Donna Jones May 2, 2013 at 6:52 PM Outstanding! Congratulations

Jeremy Martin May 2, 2013 at 9:42 AM Wonderful, powerful repetition. "is not her own" in the first stanza is so powerful, it builds a mystery and momentum that really gives this poem good kinetic energy.

Poet Destroyer A May 1, 2013 at 6:19 PM Abdulhafeez, a nice winning poem in the "WORD PORTRAIT" contest :-) *LINDA

Sheri Fresonke Harper April 30, 2013 at 10:47 AM Abdulhafeez, enjoyed your wonderful sense of song and contrast in this poem, sharing what you value and see, enjoyed reading it. Congratulations.

Joseph May April 30, 2013 at 8:15 AM congrats on your win A.O

Anne-Lise Andresen April 22, 2013 at 5:42 AM - This is a poem that shows your excellence , is well written A.O. ! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A April 21, 2013 at 11:16 AM Abdulhafeez, your poem is amazing... thanks for the nice congrats on my poems... always...PD

Len Gasun April 21, 2013 at 7:35 AM This is highly creative and unique write my dear friend, AO. You're indeed a very talented poet. Two thumbs up! Thank you so much for sharing again your gem with me & your warm congratulatory comments on my poem. Have a great day! love and hugs, Leonora

Andrea Dietrich April 20, 2013 at 10:45 PM Very interesting one, you have a creative mind, Abdul. (hope you don't mind that I shorten your name)

Alumbugu Akolo April 20, 2013 at 9:22 AM truely magical,u painted this picture to be prettier than the woman..love this

Richard Lamoureux April 20, 2013 at 8:36 AM I like the way you use your words in an unconventional way. Have a great weekend.

John Posey April 20, 2013 at 6:44 AM Very creative! To see, or not see so much in just pictures takes great talent.... Nice going ..... Jake