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Thyme and Sage

How I crave the warmth and cool Hop in a puddle, then a pool Sit on a throne, then a stool How I wish I can go to school Half of me broke off, and has gone away My life stays an unmolded piece of clay I want to hop around and play with others my own age I smell the air of thyme and sage Wish me luck, Maybe I will someday

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/6/2010 11:15:00 PM
Cute poem. I love to cook with thyme and sage. Ellen
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Date: 2/19/2010 12:52:00 AM
A bit of a nonsense rhyme I do them myself sometimes are you young of age? or a wise old sage? Witty I think, well done...thank you for your kind comments today....Margaret
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Date: 2/16/2010 4:32:00 AM
Sounds like a fun thing to play with people one's own age. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and reading my work. Sara
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Date: 1/22/2010 11:34:00 AM
"Throne" sorry about the grammar police but it was alittle confusing. Other than that a lovely little poem. The rhythm & rhyme are beautiful. I don't really get it but it reads phenomenally may I ask what it's about? <3
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