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THY WORD

Lord, Thy Word my torch Along dark paths I walked Shadows vanished! © Demetrios Trifiatis 14 NOVEMBER 2014

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Date: 11/29/2014 8:51:00 PM
wow,I am not into religious haiku very much but this one was very well constructed. LOVE it.
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Date: 12/7/2014 3:38:00 AM
Andrea, my dear, I haven't seen it. Thank you so much for visiting and commenting in such a lovely way!
Date: 11/19/2014 7:34:00 PM
Dear Demetrios: God must be proud of you my friend. Please take a look at my new poem called "Troy" and tell me what you think. All the best then, Leon.
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Date: 11/20/2014 4:58:00 AM
I think God is proud of his creation, therefore, proud for all of us, my dear friend, Leon, however, to follow your comment, please, have a look at John's Third Epist.:12 just for to support...your claim! Ha-ha! I will look at "Troy" Thank you!
Date: 11/16/2014 10:08:00 AM
Hi Demetrios: Good to hear from you again! Your poem created a path of light and Faith
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Date: 11/16/2014 10:44:00 AM
Thank you, Ralf, for your delightful comment!
Date: 11/14/2014 4:47:00 PM
Once again, my dear Demetrios, I'm sorry! Your Haiku is a soul lifter as Rajat said! Have a great weekend, my friend! Jack
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Date: 11/15/2014 8:55:00 AM
Finally, your portrait decorates my page my friend, Jack! You are a...soul lifter. Thank you for visiting and commenting!
Date: 11/14/2014 3:18:00 PM
Demetrios -- Herr Professor, Ihr Gedicht hier (Haiku) ist wirklich fabelhaft!! Most emotive and quite powerful. A "7" Sir, and going in my FAV file. Ein Schoenes Wochenende!! Gary
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Date: 11/15/2014 8:57:00 AM
Danke sehr mein freund, Gary, for your heartfelt comment and for your generous nature, I appreciate it!
Date: 11/14/2014 12:15:00 PM
- Brilliant written, my friend Demetrios! - Lovely weekend to you - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/15/2014 8:56:00 AM
My dear friend, Anne Lise, thank you for your lovely visit and comment!
Date: 11/14/2014 11:57:00 AM
Your clever haiku brightened my day:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/15/2014 8:59:00 AM
Jan, I am happy to have brightened your day. Thank you! Hugs xx!
Date: 11/14/2014 11:00:00 AM
Yes if u hv faith n walk wid confidence, darkness fades away for sure! What a soulful positive write Demetrios my friend!
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Date: 11/15/2014 9:00:00 AM
Absolutely true my dearest friend, Dr. Upma! Thank you for your positive comment!
Date: 11/14/2014 10:58:00 AM
God's way is always illumined. No shadows. God first. Soul lifter Demetrios. Love XXXX rajat
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Date: 11/15/2014 9:02:00 AM
Yes, HIS way is always lit with HIS wisdom, unfortunately not all chose to see HIS light! Thank you so much my friend, Rajat, for your precious visit and comment!
Date: 11/14/2014 10:32:00 AM
a walk of faith -- "in your light, we see light" Ps. 36:9 -- this is a worthy haiku my friend . . . it has brighten my day, may we always walk in the light my dear friend.
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Date: 11/15/2014 9:05:00 AM
My brother in faith, David, thank you for quoting Ps 36:9 for it shows that I am on the right path! I appreciate your kind visit and heartfelt comment!