Thy Word

Lord, Thy Word my torch
Along dark paths, I walked
Shadows vanished! 


© Demetrios Trifiatis
   14 NOVEMBER 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Dietrich Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 8:51 PM
wow,I am not into religious haiku very much but this one was very well constructed. LOVE it.
Trifiatis Avatar
December 7, 2014 at 3:38 AM
Andrea, my dear, I haven't seen it. Thank you so much for visiting and commenting in such a lovely way!
Enriquez Avatar
November 19, 2014 at 7:34 PM
Dear Demetrios: God must be proud of you my friend. Please take a look at my new poem called "Troy" and tell me what you think. All the best then, Leon.
Trifiatis Avatar
November 20, 2014 at 4:58 AM
I think God is proud of his creation, therefore, proud for all of us, my dear friend, Leon, however, to follow your comment, please, have a look at John's Third Epist.:12 just for to support...your claim! Ha-ha! I will look at "Troy" Thank you!
Sergi Avatar
November 16, 2014 at 10:08 AM
Hi Demetrios: Good to hear from you again! Your poem created a path of light and Faith
Trifiatis Avatar
November 16, 2014 at 10:44 AM
Thank you, Ralf, for your delightful comment!
Ellison Avatar
November 14, 2014 at 4:47 PM
Once again, my dear Demetrios, I'm sorry! Your Haiku is a soul lifter as Rajat said! Have a great weekend, my friend! Jack
Trifiatis Avatar
November 15, 2014 at 8:55 AM
Finally, your portrait decorates my page my friend, Jack! You are a...soul lifter. Thank you for visiting and commenting!
Bateman Avatar
November 14, 2014 at 3:18 PM
Demetrios -- Herr Professor, Ihr Gedicht hier (Haiku) ist wirklich fabelhaft!! Most emotive and quite powerful. A "7" Sir, and going in my FAV file. Ein Schoenes Wochenende!! Gary
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November 15, 2014 at 8:57 AM
Danke sehr mein freund, Gary, for your heartfelt comment and for your generous nature, I appreciate it!
Andresen Avatar
November 14, 2014 at 12:15 PM
- Brilliant written, my friend Demetrios! - Lovely weekend to you - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Trifiatis Avatar
November 15, 2014 at 8:56 AM
My dear friend, Anne Lise, thank you for your lovely visit and comment!
Allison Avatar
November 14, 2014 at 11:57 AM
Your clever haiku brightened my day:-) Hugs Jan xx
Trifiatis Avatar
November 15, 2014 at 8:59 AM
Jan, I am happy to have brightened your day. Thank you! Hugs xx!
A. Sharma Avatar
November 14, 2014 at 11:00 AM
Yes if u hv faith n walk wid confidence, darkness fades away for sure! What a soulful positive write Demetrios my friend!
Trifiatis Avatar
November 15, 2014 at 9:00 AM
Absolutely true my dearest friend, Dr. Upma! Thank you for your positive comment!
Chakrabarty Avatar
November 14, 2014 at 10:58 AM
God's way is always illumined. No shadows. God first. Soul lifter Demetrios. Love XXXX rajat
Trifiatis Avatar
November 15, 2014 at 9:02 AM
Yes, HIS way is always lit with HIS wisdom, unfortunately not all chose to see HIS light! Thank you so much my friend, Rajat, for your precious visit and comment!
Meade Avatar
November 14, 2014 at 10:32 AM
a walk of faith -- "in your light, we see light" Ps. 36:9 -- this is a worthy haiku my friend . . . it has brighten my day, may we always walk in the light my dear friend.
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November 15, 2014 at 9:05 AM
My brother in faith, David, thank you for quoting Ps 36:9 for it shows that I am on the right path! I appreciate your kind visit and heartfelt comment!
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