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Thus, Two Are One

We spent the moments partaking in real joy
Cuddling, dreaming, fulfilling a ploy
Happily sharing closeness
Imagining us
Two hearts one
Thus
Attraction
Leaving thoughts breathless 
Dreams flowing free from hopeless
Aware of all that we can enjoy
We spent the moments partaking in real joy




Focus on the heart
An Invented Form - Help Me Name It! - Poetry Contest, SPONSOR: Andrea Dietrich

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/27/2015 10:48:00 PM
Regina, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win :-) ~SKAT~
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Date: 2/24/2015 1:10:00 AM
How sweet is ur write Regina!Lovely read my friend,, where hv u been? Congrats on big win!
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Date: 2/23/2015 6:59:00 PM
Very sweet and romantic, Regina. Congratulations on your win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 2/23/2015 2:34:00 PM
Congrats Regina.
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Date: 2/23/2015 11:31:00 AM
Nicely done. Congrats Regina.
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Date: 2/23/2015 8:23:00 AM
This is really good. Congratulations.
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Date: 2/23/2015 7:48:00 AM
Congrats on your win ;)
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Date: 2/23/2015 2:17:00 AM
beautifully penned Regina:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 2/23/2015 12:59:00 AM
A romantic one!! The center word very interesting. it actually worked out ok for not being a noun, which I think serves people better for a focal point. Congrats on your win. I really liked this.
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