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Thunking Drunk

i'd written
and thought
hidden several
drafts but cheers

to the last
pint that has
me with frothy
mustache over my

hairy but
beware of
the tickle to
come when i

down
the last
draft and
laugh and

say gan bei
cin cin salud
prost and skal
but after awhile

i'm
lost in
translation
????? ???????

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Date: 9/25/2019 8:14:00 AM
I haven’t been that drunk in a while.
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 9/25/2019 8:56:00 AM
I apologize for a delayed reaction to your comment Richard; it's just that PoetrySoup tends to freeze up my phone. BUT I am happy you read this poem and aren't that drunk lol. The last line wasn't to be question marks, but it works. Originally it was Russian for "cheers".

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