Thunder's Threat

Thunder's threat


You know us
Yet you are still gossip on us
You know we have no where expect
Here to lay our comfort
Cozy bed. Thunder, why must
You extrude the rain
Your lighten is enough to make
Us fear, it makes our body din
Some of us have grown
With greyish hair
Now he's about to fall, he is just
Coming like dew, where do you want
Us to lay ourselves at this night
We will just be left strand in him, as he's
Already injecting us with heavy breeze.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Laurie Avatar
July 29, 2015 at 2:37 AM
G'day Afolabi... the scales of justice will never balance until the rich offer assistance to the vagrant poor who only wish for a roof over their head at night - thank you Afolabi - Lindsay
Kendrick Avatar
July 2, 2015 at 2:26 PM
Descriptive work..Enjoyed reading this one today.The fact that there are homeless people is very sad and one never knows what life can issue out so that we could be in the same fix..Thanks for the visit to my page.Sara
Muideen Avatar
July 2, 2015 at 5:11 PM
Thank you for your comment. Those people were in great suffering, my prayer to the Marvel is to have mercy on then, at times when I watched them on TV I feel sorry for them.....bless you.
Callus Avatar
June 29, 2015 at 7:28 AM
Hi Afolabi! Our life can never be completely serene; threats appear like dark clouds, and their effects are like those of lightning. Enjoyed this poem of yours. All the best. // paul
Muideen Avatar
June 29, 2015 at 8:57 AM
Thank you for your worm and pleasantly comment, as for those they are vagrant, they have no where to sleep expect to lay maybe piece of cloth on the ground behind a shop or somewhere else to sleep for the night, my prayer to God is to save them from evil and bless them so as to not live like that again. Thanks again
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