Bernardo F. Asuncion Poet Haiku

thunderous sky hiku

   

For Brian Strand's Your Choice R Poetry Contest

30 May 2025





  ~  ~  ~ dark clouds softly roll,  ~  ~ ~
       \     /
        \   /
         \ /  then lightning splits the heavens,
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       . . . . . . rain cleanses the world. . . . .

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Andrea Dietrich June 1, 2025 at 11:56 AM I like this. For the judges here though, if you enter haiku contests, never use capitalization. Just in case you enter contests Bernardo F. Asuncion June 8, 2025 at 1:35 AM Thanks for the tip. Because of your help and guidance, I won a few contests. So grateful.