Get Your Premium Membership

Thunder Roars All Around Us

thunder roars all around us
rain has pillaged the Earth in petrichor
trees bend in the wind 
and retrieve their stature
only to succumb to yet another burst
two pluviophile's sitting on the balcony
our conversations are mostly absent 
from these words
you have taught me the gentle conversation
no need to dig into some dictionary
when love's simplicity beckons
yet she is a sponge 
in the language i command
such a lady you are to me
says, what does that mean
i love it when you are a child in hand
i am called to duty
you never bring me to impatience
patience has awarded me beyond my dreams
the jewels i give you dance in your eyes
i just wish, but i cannot go there
the world would only intrude
it is the crown of thorns 
my heart silently bears
your air of innocence is something i guard
a wolf leaps from your shadow 
with deadly intent
aimed at the throat of any violator
the fate of a pluviophile 
lost in the petrichor and you
God must hold a special pity 
for me to be so graced
and i have learned from all of this
it is in the aiding of healing 
we discover each other
the river's course remains unchained and free
love should be rampant lava 
consuming all in its path
a pyroclastic flow that sweeps
two hearts into one
rain praters on while the wind 
tosses badinage amok
as the lightning parries above
we retire for a nap in each other's arms
where the wolf in your shadow
is at rest
paradise enow 

   Abilene   The Fate Within

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 7/16/2023 9:15:00 AM
Dear Timothy, I was captured by your lush poetic expression. Indeed, I am a "pluviophile" and relished knowing that the narrator is too. I admire the gentle strength of your passionate imagery "the river's course remains unchained and free/love should be rampant lava/consuming all in its path/a pyroclastic flow that sweeps two hearts into one" and I adore the use of the word "enow". I am swept away in the "unchained and free" river of your soul baring Romanticism! Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan P.S. Love the Bruno Mars vid too
Login to Reply
Ray Avatar
Timothy Ray
Date: 7/18/2023 6:18:00 AM
thank you Susan....i am your fan without a doubt....yes I too love that Bruno Mars song...i write with music playing in the background, often you will find this comment on a Youtube song left by me..."this is where the beauty of a love poem grows wings and becomes the music filling the sky" love is the greatest of them...it is the message, not the messenger....Grace is a journey where we learn the height of forgiveness which opens our world to the greatest gift of them all....love...it is why Grace is so Amazing
Date: 7/14/2023 9:08:00 AM
just the way you are - bruno mars (in ASL) https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9vrboKNjpMk Stand by you--ASL https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fo9VVE6xC8w
Login to Reply

Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry