Thunder Clouds

the clouds looked~

 thunderous as the....
  
    sky frowned in anticipation...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Babcock Avatar
September 7, 2008 at 10:08 AM
Great write . I love the personification in this piece. God Bless Phyl
Loving Iii Avatar
September 7, 2008 at 6:48 AM
the clouds are alive and the do show their feelings like our dogs do.john
Foulk Avatar
September 6, 2008 at 11:00 AM
loved this short write a lot said in few words.
Buys Avatar
September 6, 2008 at 8:56 AM
Love the last line, never thought of it like that, but so spot on. Well done. Regards Heidie
Reynolds Avatar
September 6, 2008 at 4:27 AM
Yes, and they abound here right now...dark and gloomy! Love Kristin
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