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Thunder Clouds

the clouds looked~ thunderous as the.... sky frowned in anticipation...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 9/7/2008 10:08:00 AM
Great write . I love the personification in this piece. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 9/7/2008 6:48:00 AM
the clouds are alive and the do show their feelings like our dogs do.john
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Date: 9/6/2008 11:00:00 AM
loved this short write a lot said in few words.
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Date: 9/6/2008 8:56:00 AM
Love the last line, never thought of it like that, but so spot on. Well done. Regards Heidie
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Date: 9/6/2008 4:27:00 AM
Yes, and they abound here right now...dark and gloomy! Love Kristin
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