Thunder

Horses in the field Hooves flying by asunder Stirring great thunder January 8, 2017

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Line Gauthier

Date: 3/10/2021 9:39:00 AM

Bravo ~ beautiful

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 7/23/2020 11:46:00 PM

just beautiful

Darren White

Date: 2/4/2017 1:06:00 AM

This insanely good! Wonderful :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/8/2017 5:45:00 PM

Just saw John's note to you. I guess he does not realize we had to adhere to 5/7/5.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/8/2017 5:44:00 PM

this one is REALLY good Paulette. One of the better entries, in my opinion.

John Fleming

Date: 1/8/2017 4:39:00 PM

This is rather good, Paulette. One suggestion though: how about rearranging it slightly by interchanging line one for line two; try reading it...you may well like how it sounds! All my very best for your New Year, Paulette...And my warmest regards! :) john

Rainbow Promise

Date: 1/8/2017 4:34:00 PM

Powerful, a 7. Best wishes, Rainbow. Please feel free to visit my page anytime.