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Thunder

Horses in the field
                                    Hooves flying by asunder
                                      Stirring great thunder















January 8, 2017

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Line Gauthier

March 10, 2021 at 9:39 AM

Bravo ~ beautiful

Mahtab Bangalee

July 23, 2020 at 11:46 PM

just beautiful

Darren White

February 4, 2017 at 1:06 AM

This insanely good! Wonderful :)

Andrea Dietrich

January 8, 2017 at 5:45 PM

Just saw John's note to you. I guess he does not realize we had to adhere to 5/7/5.

Andrea Dietrich

January 8, 2017 at 5:44 PM

this one is REALLY good Paulette. One of the better entries, in my opinion.

John Fleming

January 8, 2017 at 4:39 PM

This is rather good, Paulette. One suggestion though: how about rearranging it slightly by interchanging line one for line two; try reading it...you may well like how it sounds! All my very best for your New Year, Paulette...And my warmest regards! :) john