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Thunder

Can you hear the thunder? It pounds into my ears It always makes me wonder if I control my fears It's hard to say I'm brave as I see that flash of light it's the terror I crave the lightning is my fright The rain pitters and patters sounding a prelude to the flood my heart beat it flatters as it boils in my blood Can you hear the thunder? it pounds into my ears I no longer have to wonder I cannot control my fears.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/5/2012 11:57:00 AM
wonderfully written with pure skill and craft. I like your words the unique sequence they use to bring out the meaning of your poem.
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Date: 6/5/2012 11:50:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Blake. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/5/2012 11:26:00 AM
aww that a good poem, I used to be scared of it when i was little but am ok with it now i got caught in two storms and thats how I got over the fear i ahd no choice to walk in it home , God bless from diane
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