Aleera De La Keur Poet Rhyme

Thug Love

Tell me Mr. Thug,
 Is it so?
That all men
 are really low?

How do you like
 all the lies you've told?
Has your heart really
 turned ice cold?

Well mine is now, 
 as hard as stone.
Thanks to you, 
 I want to be alone!

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Edward Orozco May 23, 2009 at 11:27 PM Wow! Aleera impacting write! Jeremia

Raul Moreno March 29, 2009 at 12:13 AM Nice quatrain Aleera, Nice imagery...Raul

Nannas Clark March 24, 2009 at 9:41 AM great write! love it.Keep writing you got that thing called TALENt.hehe peace nannas

Mickey Pig Knuckles March 11, 2009 at 8:24 PM Oh Aleera, this poem rings true for almost all guys and that sure makes it difficult for the few good ones left. I commend you for yet another poem of reality and truth. Thank You for sharing your amazing gift with us all... MPK

Debbie Guzzi March 11, 2009 at 4:57 PM yup, men can bite. LOL Light & Love Debbie

Breana Wiggins March 9, 2009 at 1:51 PM wow!. .great right!. . .best wishes. . ~Breana~