Thru the Eyes of a Child

(8/22/12)

When I was a child I climbed the tallest tree that I could find
To see all the beauties that GOD left behind.
I’ve never been to any snow capped mountain
Or ever climbed the highest peak
But he shows me words and lays them at my feet.

I see the baseball field where my friends and I would play
And I see the patch of grass where my head would lay.
I see myself laying there as the world passes by
Counting every cloud that’s high up in the sky.

I feel the summer breeze as it passes through my hair
Ever so gentle- much more than I could bare.
I climbed up higher at least sixty feet above the ground
Just so I could hear all those familiar sounds.

The birds singing tunes to delight the ears
Wiping away all those childish fears.
I gazed across the park taking in all the sights
Watching younger children in the sprinklers
Jumping with delight.

I felt myself getting light headed, but not because of the height
But because of the words which I knew I could not fight.
So I climbed down from the tree , and said a little prayer
For the words he had  given me
I knew that I must share.

This was my first inkling for what was in store for me
That was when I knew- I had to write poetry.


© L. RAMS
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 8/27/2012 8:22:00 AM
Louis I do believe that you are a poet at heart and a very good one. Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem with us. Lucilla
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Date: 8/28/2012 3:09:00 PM
you honor me LUCILLA - thank you so much
Date: 8/26/2012 7:20:00 PM
you were prepared for the future and you learned well,great write great poet
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Date: 8/28/2012 3:10:00 PM
thank you richard - that's good to hear
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