Joe Maverick Poet Verse

Thru Ab-Straction To Absolution

Take "me" away,,
from truths..) un-form me"
unseen to halogise with...
May my aptness be swirled
and re-involved prescience
emerge now as resolutions to
eternal resolve..Are become..!


copyright Joe Maverick 2012
in support of Brian Strands abstract me competition

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Michelle Mac Donald June 6, 2012 at 8:13 PM Feels as though this had been penned during profound thought spaces, Joe! "un-form me"...until "become". "eternal resolve" gives this a decisive note. Best wishes, Love, Mikki Joe Maverick April 11, 2023 at 10:57 PM Thank you for commenting.'

Elizabeth Wesley May 14, 2012 at 8:52 PM My mind becomes abstract reading this; I needed a good tweak tonight to get my mind in gear. All the best in the contest! Luv, Lizzie Joe Maverick April 11, 2023 at 10:57 PM Thank you for commenting.'

Don Johnson March 12, 2012 at 4:58 AM abstract it is ...for brian tis... keep at it cobber mate.... Joe Maverick April 11, 2023 at 10:58 PM Thanks old mate Your comments great.'

Doris Culverhouse February 5, 2012 at 9:57 AM Thanks for your support....I am ok just had a bad day and blew some steam!!

Jack Horne February 2, 2012 at 1:55 PM very clever piece, my friend

Carol Sunshine Brown January 27, 2012 at 12:00 PM I am stopping by to thank you for your comment on my poem "Touching" Joe. I hope you have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol

Harry Horsman January 22, 2012 at 8:55 AM so this is what it's all about, (abstract) that is. thanks Joe, i'm learning every day. harry

Don Johnson January 21, 2012 at 3:20 PM Well done Joe should abstract Brian, without a contradiction, thanks mate for comments....

Judy Ball January 20, 2012 at 7:53 PM WoW! You never fail to make me think. I love your way with words. Good Stuff my friend. God Bless, JB

Doris Culverhouse January 20, 2012 at 8:39 AM enjoyed....may need the dictionary to fully understand. our preacher gave out some words that I didn't know and I told my hubby that he was just showing out....or making stuff up. though I did find the word in the dictionary. hehe!!

Debbie Guzzi January 17, 2012 at 5:50 AM almost blank verse Joe..unrhymed verse with meter ..Take me away/from the truths unform me/ unseen to the halogise with/May my aptness be swirled and reformed re involved a prescience/to emerge now/as a resolution eternal/ to resolve/ to become..very cool bean concept and excellent mental jaunt..Light & Love

Sara Kendrick January 12, 2012 at 5:24 PM Enjoyed reading your great work..Reads like a winner..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Judy Ball January 10, 2012 at 4:45 PM WoW! This one is really deep. A fine entry. Should be a winner. God Bless, JB

Wilma Neels January 10, 2012 at 11:08 AM Hey there Joe, you sure brought abstract to the table with this one ;) I enjoyed it.. Thank you for dropping in on my side of the world and for the smiles you bring ;) tc Wilma

Poet Destroyer A January 9, 2012 at 10:56 PM Dear Joe, you are wonderful... Taking it all back... Thanks for the becoming thoughts... Take care..pd

Kimberly Larocca January 9, 2012 at 8:25 PM Thanks for the visit. This was a very interesting write.

M.I.A . January 9, 2012 at 6:28 PM you are like picasso joe, not easily understood but one just knew there's a greatness in you. good luck on the contest

Andrea Dietrich January 8, 2012 at 11:44 AM Hey, joe am having to use joe's ;puter (MY joe. haha) just wanted to say hi. Gotta get off his laptop now and get to church. BYE, andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 7, 2012 at 6:16 PM pure pristine work of art Joe.. good luck in contest my friend... thankxx for uplifting words and comments and well wishes to me.. much appreciated.. glad to be back ..slow but sure.. learning to type all over again luv..

Andrea Dietrich January 3, 2012 at 9:58 PM thanks for your kidding comments today, Joe.You are the greatest!

Judy Ball January 3, 2012 at 7:24 AM This is great Joe. I only hope I can do well with my own resolutions. I'm just gonna try to learn to keep my mouth shut and breathe through my nose. ;) God Bless and Happy New Year, JB :)

Nancy Jones January 2, 2012 at 8:47 PM me too.

Andrea Dietrich January 2, 2012 at 8:34 PM YUP, that's abstract all right!!! Gosh, I don't have a clue what to use for a contest like this. This seems a good one for New years as well! LUv, Andrea

Elizabeth Wesley January 2, 2012 at 5:47 PM I had to look up a couple of the words Joe but it came together perfectly. Hope the resolutions are able to be kept!