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Through the Haze

There you sat amongst the fescue the yellow dotted posies full sun ever growing still the breezes blew at your curl I bent down to take you in a scent of fresh ambrosia with flecks of care mixing morning air it was love dancing before my eye wild and free it was in your nature and in mine reminders of long soft kisses til June my heart did beat, then swoon your vision held my gaze I, so amazed your skies painted blue on not just one afternoon drunk, with no misgivings life, disorderly mysteriously moves in such harmonious content I look back at you at that twinkle thru the haze

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 11/5/2019 10:07:00 AM
Beautiful and captivating images, I want to get caught in a haze like yours. Hugs
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Ts Poetry
Date: 11/5/2019 7:02:00 PM
Thank you Cecilia
Date: 11/4/2019 12:22:00 PM
See I know I left a comment but it's disappeared! Poof like that! Hummm! But I love the 5th stanza but the whole poem is true poetry!
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Date: 11/4/2019 1:01:00 PM
Yes you commented before...don't know where it went...I was at work but thanks again B
Date: 11/4/2019 8:54:00 AM
Fescue. sounds messy...a stiff cup of coffee or two will help with the haze...
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Date: 11/4/2019 9:07:00 AM
One down already..thanks L
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 11/4/2019 8:55:00 AM
https://youtu.be/yPNK1phU1q0
Date: 11/4/2019 7:51:00 AM
Beautiful
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Ts Poetry
Date: 11/4/2019 7:58:00 AM
Thanks Cassie
Date: 11/4/2019 7:49:00 AM
fresh ambrosia... This was a beautiful poem. Ann
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Ts Poetry
Date: 11/4/2019 7:57:00 AM
Thank you Ann

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