Aiyah Torres Poet Kimo

Through My Window

moonlight shadow staring in the night
                        Adonis is standing
                   with three flowers in hands.

              serenading the woman of his life
             true love that blooms in two hearts       
                happened through my window.









Entry for Nette Onclaud's "Through My window" Poetry Contest
AiyaH Darkest D.
Jan.17,2014

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Poet Tacito January 21, 2014 at 12:57 AM This was very touching for sure. Ah, the simple pleasures of telling one how they feel. Wonderful job.

Michael Byte January 18, 2014 at 11:34 AM Very well written my friend on a lost form of romance. Aiyah Torres January 20, 2014 at 11:44 AM thank you,my ever supportive friend, Mike :)).. have a great weekdays!! *__*

Liam Mcdaid January 18, 2014 at 9:41 AM beautifully crafted excellent piece Aiyah Torres January 18, 2014 at 9:50 AM thank you for a delight ful comment my friend liam.. ;'))

Dr.Ram Mehta January 18, 2014 at 8:52 AM Lovely and creative write, AiyaH Aiyah Torres January 18, 2014 at 9:00 AM hint: ..this is my love story...happened 12 years ago...it's a culture in our country...but sad, it's not being practiced now.. :)) ..i think Nette can relate with this,we called it.. "HARANA".. :)) Aiyah Torres January 18, 2014 at 8:56 AM Thank you, Dr. Ram!! ..i'm glad you appreciate it!! ;-))

Anne-Lise Andresen January 18, 2014 at 6:48 AM - A really lovely poem,AiyaH ! - (I thought it was my computer that there was something wrong with yesterday - by mistake   was my last poem deleted ... posted it over again today.) - Have a enjoyable weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Aiyah Torres January 18, 2014 at 7:41 AM oh..Anne..Thank you !!! ..i experienced the same,too...i've almost took about 8 hours trying to open our link...thank God its OK now... :-)) hope you have a great weekend as well.. *__*

Mohammad Abedin January 17, 2014 at 7:55 PM Nice poem Aiyah Torres January 18, 2014 at 7:42 AM Thank you,Mohammad :-))