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Through My Window

moonlight shadow staring in the night Adonis is standing with three flowers in hands. serenading the woman of his life true love that blooms in two hearts happened through my window. Entry for Nette Onclaud's "Through My window" Poetry Contest AiyaH Darkest D. Jan.17,2014

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Poet Tacito

Date: 1/21/2014 12:57:00 AM

This was very touching for sure. Ah, the simple pleasures of telling one how they feel. Wonderful job.

Michael Byte

Date: 1/18/2014 11:34:00 AM

Very well written my friend on a lost form of romance.

Aiyah Torres
Date: 1/20/2014 11:44:00 AM

thank you,my ever supportive friend, Mike :)).. have a great weekdays!! *__*

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 1/18/2014 9:41:00 AM

beautifully crafted excellent piece

Aiyah Torres
Date: 1/18/2014 9:50:00 AM

thank you for a delight ful comment my friend liam.. ;'))

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/18/2014 8:52:00 AM

Lovely and creative write, AiyaH

Aiyah Torres
Date: 1/18/2014 9:00:00 AM

hint: ..this is my love story...happened 12 years ago...it's a culture in our country...but sad, it's not being practiced now.. :)) ..i think Nette can relate with this,we called it.. "HARANA".. :))

Aiyah Torres
Date: 1/18/2014 8:56:00 AM

Thank you, Dr. Ram!! ..i'm glad you appreciate it!! ;-))

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/18/2014 6:48:00 AM

- A really lovely poem,AiyaH ! - (I thought it was my computer that there was something wrong with yesterday - by mistake was my last poem deleted ... posted it over again today.) - Have a enjoyable weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Aiyah Torres
Date: 1/18/2014 7:41:00 AM

oh..Anne..Thank you !!! ..i experienced the same,too...i've almost took about 8 hours trying to open our link...thank God its OK now... :-)) hope you have a great weekend as well.. *__*

Mohammad Abedin

Date: 1/17/2014 7:55:00 PM

Nice poem

Aiyah Torres
Date: 1/18/2014 7:42:00 AM

Thank you,Mohammad :-))