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Although my favorite season is the fall, I must admit I do like the summer too.

As the sunray's beam ~ through my sunroom shades 
And the warmth of summer ~ slowly fades 
My old heart soothes ~ when flowers bloom 
And newborns exit ~ mother's wombs
 
Songbirds singing ~ in backyard baths 
Children playing ~ out bursting laughs 
Ocean's beaches ~ morning boat rides 
Swimming, fishing ~ on moonlit tides
 
Four or "Fore" ~ an eighteen hole 
The groundhog's call ~ bless his soul 
His tale a myth ~ his truth be told 
Summer's here ~ lo and behold
 
Priceless moments ~ in summer's sun 
Love it, enjoy it ~ so much fun 
Summer season ~ I do adore 
If I were god ~ I'd give us more

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 9/6/2018 2:02:00 PM
My dear friend, Charlie, your enchanted verses flow in silky fluidity with the beauty of your rhythm, imagery and rhymes. Your poem captivates and shines like a clear summer day.. Warmest wishes always my charming friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 9/6/2018 7:16:00 AM
Summer isn't it a wonderful time? Your poem conveys all the magic of the season, right from the songbirds singing to children playing, the beach and of course fishing. Wonderful memories, wonderful poem, a gem and a fave for me Charlie....Maria hugs
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Date: 9/5/2018 4:30:00 PM
This is wonderful, however, I should point out that the rhyme scheme is not rubaiyat... it would be a shame to see such a wonderful poem DQ from the contest because the rhyme scheme is off.
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Charles Messina
Date: 9/5/2018 6:33:00 PM
Thank you very much, Jesse. For your kind words and for pointing that out. (soup mail) All the best, Charlie
Date: 9/5/2018 4:24:00 PM
marvelous flow of thoughts and images, charles... very nice!... huggs
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Charles Messina
Date: 9/5/2018 6:34:00 PM
Thank you, Nette. I appreciate that. huggs :)
Date: 9/5/2018 3:29:00 PM
Love it Charlie, I captures what summer is all about, with your humorous overtones, of course. A lovely poem. Good luck!!!
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Charles Messina
Date: 9/5/2018 6:35:00 PM
Thank you, Sandra. So much appreciated!

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