Through Dark Rainfalls

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Through dark rainfalls,
how can I sleep?

A nightmare crawls
through dark rainfalls!

It pries the walls
and tries to seep 

through. Dark rain falls...
How can I sleep?

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Sundman Avatar
September 5, 2015 at 4:14 AM
Dark and spooky.
Harding Avatar
September 5, 2015 at 3:16 PM
Hi Gabriel! True, but without the dark, there is no light...
Rashid Avatar
September 3, 2015 at 5:45 PM
ahhhhh..gosh it is really fearing me here and reminding of all dark i have faced but it on the other gives a way out for those who belive in light perfctly you have graced the words and the title##congrats
Harding Avatar
September 5, 2015 at 3:15 PM
Thank you, Kamran. What a cool comment! We must always remember - without the dark, there is no light...
Nunez Avatar
August 28, 2015 at 12:32 AM
Wet and dark triolet ... Good write! Best luck in the contest, dear!
Harding Avatar
August 28, 2015 at 9:15 AM
Kim! Hi. Thank you, my little Poe. Good luck to you, as well (if you enter) I'm sure you will come up with something dark and perfect, as usual. Xoxo
United Avatar
August 22, 2015 at 4:39 PM
This is deep and dark Lycia - good luck :-) hugs Jan xx (yes its me - I am back with my writing partner after a year's break woohoo dreams do come true:-)
Harding Avatar
August 22, 2015 at 6:16 PM
Thank you, Jan. And good job on re-uniting with your writing partner. A year goes by fast but if you're waiting on something, it can feel like ten! xoxo LyLy
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