Through Dark Rainfalls

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Through dark rainfalls,
how can I sleep?

A nightmare crawls
through dark rainfalls!

It pries the walls
and tries to seep 

through. Dark rain falls...
How can I sleep?

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Date: 9/5/2015 4:14:00 AM
Dark and spooky.
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Lycia Harding
Date: 9/5/2015 3:16:00 PM
Hi Gabriel! True, but without the dark, there is no light...
Date: 9/3/2015 5:45:00 PM
ahhhhh..gosh it is really fearing me here and reminding of all dark i have faced but it on the other gives a way out for those who belive in light perfctly you have graced the words and the title##congrats
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Lycia Harding
Date: 9/5/2015 3:15:00 PM
Thank you, Kamran. What a cool comment! We must always remember - without the dark, there is no light...
Date: 8/28/2015 12:32:00 AM
Wet and dark triolet ... Good write! Best luck in the contest, dear!
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Lycia Harding
Date: 8/28/2015 9:15:00 AM
Kim! Hi. Thank you, my little Poe. Good luck to you, as well (if you enter) I'm sure you will come up with something dark and perfect, as usual. Xoxo
Date: 8/22/2015 4:39:00 PM
This is deep and dark Lycia - good luck :-) hugs Jan xx (yes its me - I am back with my writing partner after a year's break woohoo dreams do come true:-)
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Lycia Harding
Date: 8/22/2015 6:16:00 PM
Thank you, Jan. And good job on re-uniting with your writing partner. A year goes by fast but if you're waiting on something, it can feel like ten! xoxo LyLy
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