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Thrill To the Sight

Look up, my son, and thrill to the sight of geese in formation, flying south Just make sure your lips are shut tight, for a fly does not enter a closed mouth August 11, 2019 Romani Proverb Poetry Contest Sponsor: Julia Ward

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Date: 8/11/2019 8:01:00 PM
Short and sweet. I like your imagery, Gershon.
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Date: 8/11/2019 9:41:00 PM
Thanks for the encouragement. (I still think that yours is the best I've seen for this contest!) :) gw
Date: 8/11/2019 3:03:00 PM
Lol! Gershon, This is a good write for the contest theme. Best wishes in the contest. Enjoy the rest of your weekend:-) Alexis
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/11/2019 3:39:00 PM
Hope you're right. Thank you for your good wishes, Alexis! :) gw
Date: 8/11/2019 2:28:00 PM
Gershon, I got that dropped punchline. Good luck in the contest. -Richard
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/11/2019 2:39:00 PM
Alright, Richard. --- as long as the punch was above the belt!! :) gw
Date: 8/11/2019 2:26:00 PM
I like your use of humour, goodluck in the contest.
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Date: 8/11/2019 2:38:00 PM
I'm competing with the 'Good Humor Man.' LOL. Thank you so much, Richard! :) gw

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