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T Words Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France

 

Written 8/8/2023

Thrill

"When we are young, we try so hard for everything to be perfect, and when it isn’t we hurt." Quote by poet A green world vast and beautiful awaits. Invitations sent out; oh, such a thrill. Preparing for a party all so still, Fun feeling, so perfect that life creates. They dance to the tempo of the music. The table dressed in lace, a vase of blue And yellow daisies, green ribbon weave through. They impatiently wait, the clock does tick. Welcome guest trickled in full of laughter. Small chitchat, singing, games they did partake. Small candles flicker on the pink, white cake. Party was done, out they followed after.
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Stark Avatar
September 1, 2023 at 1:30 AM
Such a visual poem,I loved it
Goldsmith Avatar
August 10, 2023 at 12:24 PM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Thrill" is a wonderful write/quote/picture. So True... Have a great day.............
Alex Avatar
August 10, 2023 at 6:37 AM
Great thrill, indeed. Congratulations!
Situation Avatar
August 9, 2023 at 7:41 PM
A party. but very discriptive like the portrait.
Dietrich Avatar
August 9, 2023 at 12:40 PM
so cool , Eve. Different thrills in this world. Parties that are a success are certainly one of them.
Andresen Avatar
August 9, 2023 at 12:17 PM
- The table was set so pretty, it must have been a lovely party - A beautiful poem, Eve :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
August 8, 2023 at 6:40 PM
Such a pretty setting, Eve! We wonder who they are and if anyone shows up for the party or are they already there…
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