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T Words Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France

 

Written 8/8/2023

"When we are young, we try so hard for everything to be perfect, and when it isn’t we hurt." Quote by poet A green world vast and beautiful awaits. Invitations sent out; oh, such a thrill. Preparing for a party all so still, Fun feeling, so perfect that life creates. They dance to the tempo of the music. The table dressed in lace, a vase of blue And yellow daisies, green ribbon weave through. They impatiently wait, the clock does tick. Welcome guest trickled in full of laughter. Small chitchat, singing, games they did partake. Small candles flicker on the pink, white cake. Party was done, out they followed after.

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Date: 9/1/2023 1:30:00 AM
Such a visual poem,I loved it
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Date: 8/10/2023 12:24:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Thrill" is a wonderful write/quote/picture. So True... Have a great day.............
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Date: 8/10/2023 6:37:00 AM
Great thrill, indeed. Congratulations!
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Date: 8/9/2023 7:41:00 PM
A party. but very discriptive like the portrait.
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Date: 8/9/2023 12:40:00 PM
so cool , Eve. Different thrills in this world. Parties that are a success are certainly one of them.
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Date: 8/9/2023 12:17:00 PM
- The table was set so pretty, it must have been a lovely party - A beautiful poem, Eve :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 8/8/2023 6:40:00 PM
Such a pretty setting, Eve! We wonder who they are and if anyone shows up for the party or are they already there…
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