Three-dom

Its dark, so dark my surrounds are quiet..Yet the 
Dawn advances.' So; so silent.' My spirit my mind
Conjects on time, on hours passing.. and new years 
Chimes' minutes become decades...No way to reverse'
The church of England denotes on 'net zero?' I think
Religion.. Is it a curse? Always waiting for some rigid form
They are never any different, lovers of a frigid norm.'
As the west advances to inanity,  in the east is much
Division, Russia now is capitailist; i see, yet China still in communisam' sometimes they claim they are partners?
The whole worlds on the boil..Oh the light of dawn.! I
Must away into the morn; of my new turmoil."
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Tor Avatar
April 4, 2025 at 4:54 AM
Hi Joe hoping you are not in a depressed mood my friend. This world can get you down in life. Hang in there trust in Jesus he is coming soon and you and I and all good men and women will be too. God bless you brother...
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April 4, 2025 at 4:59 AM
Thank you Michael..I am Generally determined no Matter what comes so either Happy or sad i drive on..' its Good to know you care.) May God keep you dear brother’
mysore Avatar
April 3, 2025 at 7:50 PM
Magnetic lines dear poet. I wonder if we ever see good times again ... thought provoking write. All are in the fray, so I worry less as I am helpless.
Maverick Avatar
April 3, 2025 at 11:40 PM
A very good comment Thriveni Thank you for visiting here.' May all be well.'
Dietrich Avatar
April 3, 2025 at 12:16 PM
I like this, Joe. Sounds like you are really down. I think lots of things are going to come to light in the near future. Let's hope it brings knowledge to open people's eyes.
Maverick Avatar
April 3, 2025 at 12:52 PM
Maybe i am Andrea.? Perhaps I have been down so long I have become like the very flint.' Yet in a spiritual way..I can laugh at adverity and the tragi comedys life displays..On top of everything I have seen the Angel that passed over Egypt as Paul said 'what can be done to me?' I have a friend who is afraid of ghosts..I said take Me with you..I will ask them to look in my eyes..As they are of the spirit world they will know my experience..So Let us laugh and be strong for the end will be better than the beginning.' All Love to you and your Joe.'
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April 2, 2025 at 10:57 PM
Powerful write my dear poet friend Joe. Sorry for coming only now coz of time constraint. Always my pleasure to read from you again. Thanks a lot for sharing your creative soulful write. God bless you always and your poetry. hugs
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April 3, 2025 at 3:02 AM
No worries Len, its always great to hear from you whenever.) All blessings.!!
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