Three Word Two Liners

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Trying my hand at this form of poetry!

SCARECROW Farmer's last cry Birds fly by AGING Growing grey hair A rocking chair ALCOHOLIC Too much drink Head in sink WEATHER Clouds slowly divert Sunburn high alert MALFUNCTION Robots having sex Must be complex

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Maria Williams

Date: 6/13/2018 5:38:00 AM

Interesting format Charles, a clever and unique poem. Truly enjoyed....Maria

Carole Duet

Date: 6/12/2018 7:45:00 PM

Sooo clever, Charles! Wow! And, that last one is too funny....lol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/12/2018 6:09:00 PM

These are awesome, Charles, and I love this form. Several years ago I wrote some poems in a similar style, though confining the last two lines of each verse to just three words is quite a challenge and you achieved very well!

Charles Messina
Date: 6/12/2018 7:46:00 PM

Wow! My night is getting better by the minute! I first saw this style a few weeks ago and I love this form too...they are quite challenging. Thanks so much Carolyn for your kind words and visit! Have a nice evening...Charlie

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 6/12/2018 12:11:00 PM

Hello Charles,|I can see a robots having sex. I like your poem. I like the way you did it. have a nice day my friend.

Charles Messina
Date: 6/12/2018 2:36:00 PM

Hi Darlene, you have better eyesight than I my dear friend. Thank you, have a nice evening!