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Three Wishes

If I had three wishes and knew that they’d come true. I’d go back in time. There are things that I’d redo. I wouldn’t do them differently and change my today. I would do them over again, in the very same way. To hear my mother laughing, see my dad’s twinkling eyes, hold my now-grown children when they were infant-size, kiss my handsome groom again on our wedding day, or sit in our old sandbox and with my siblings play. If I had three wishes, I’d travel through the past to do again my favorite things to make the memories last. Thank you for the wishes! That’s what I would do. But I only need the one. You can keep the other two. Date: October 24, 2018 Three Wishes Premier Poetry Contest Sponsor: Kevin Shaw ~2nd place 520 Standard Contest, any form Sponsor: Brian Strand a 1st place

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Date: 1/27/2021 2:23:00 PM
This is a great poem I only been on here for a little while but this is MY favorite poem I read yet.
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Date: 2/1/2021 3:04:00 PM
Wow! thank you so much! :) ~ps
Date: 1/27/2021 2:17:00 PM
Did you ever fight with your siblings? Just joking. Enjoyed your 3 wishes poem, I agree with many others in their praise of the poem.
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Date: 2/1/2021 3:03:00 PM
Yes! thank you so much :)~ps
Date: 6/25/2020 5:41:00 AM
great wishes .........pleasure to read
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Date: 6/25/2020 2:30:00 PM
hi Mahtab :) Thank you!
Date: 11/17/2018 6:49:00 PM
very nice. loved it.
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Date: 11/17/2018 8:11:00 PM
Thank you very much.
Date: 11/15/2018 7:30:00 PM
Beautiful! I agree with your sentiment as well!
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Date: 11/15/2018 7:37:00 PM
thank you, Susan :)
Date: 11/10/2018 5:50:00 AM
Great write well done
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Date: 11/10/2018 10:32:00 AM
thank you, Nick :)
Date: 11/7/2018 12:56:00 PM
Ahhhh!! Enjoyed reading your work. Way to go..Very expressive and emotive ..Sara
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Date: 11/7/2018 3:52:00 PM
Thank you, Sara! ..for the visit and compliment :) Glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 11/6/2018 12:34:00 PM
Hello P.S. I like this poem. I would do over a few things. have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 11/6/2018 1:39:00 PM
Glad you liked it, Darlene :)
Date: 11/6/2018 11:26:00 AM
Heart warming! Very nice.
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Date: 11/6/2018 11:46:00 AM
Thank you so much, Brian :)
Date: 11/4/2018 2:55:00 PM
Great take on it! I expected the do over as I'm guessing most did, nice twist.
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Date: 11/4/2018 3:14:00 PM
Thank you, M.P., for your visit and compliment :)
Date: 11/4/2018 12:32:00 AM
Like a taste of Contentment from Long Ago! It is so good to celebrate what is beautiful and right in our lives! BRAVO!
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Date: 11/4/2018 8:12:00 AM
Thank you, Andrew, for your visit and kind words :)
Date: 10/31/2018 1:50:00 AM
I absolutely love this beautiful poem P.S. This is going into my faves! Congratulations on your wonderful 2nd place. : )
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Date: 10/31/2018 4:14:00 AM
Thank you so much!
Date: 10/28/2018 6:11:00 PM
Beautiful, PS. Congrats on your silver medal win.
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Date: 10/28/2018 7:14:00 PM
Thank you, Line :)
Date: 10/28/2018 5:28:00 PM
Some lovely ideas expressed here, P.S and congratulations on your win. Wendy
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Date: 10/28/2018 7:13:00 PM
Thank you, Wendy. I have to say when I read your entry, I was blown away ... and envious, I wish I had written it!
Date: 10/26/2018 6:15:00 AM
I can think of no better three wishes than these. Thank you for your wonderful poetry P.S. -Richard
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Date: 10/26/2018 8:44:00 AM
Thank you, Richard for the visit and your kind words!
Date: 10/25/2018 7:10:00 AM
loved it! Awesome rhymes right on time
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Date: 10/25/2018 11:01:00 AM
Thank you! I am glad you liked it :)
Date: 10/25/2018 5:53:00 AM
I would love to go back and visit the ones I've lost. Love this poem P.S.
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Date: 10/25/2018 11:00:00 AM
ok. you can have those other 2 wishes <3
Date: 10/24/2018 10:39:00 PM
I love it that you want to go back and re-live so many terrific moments, but you are not changing anything, and you are unselfishly giving back two of the three wishes. Well done P.S. Outstanding!
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Date: 10/24/2018 11:00:00 PM
Thank you, Caren! I am glad you like it.

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