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Three Wishes Premiere Contest Winner

A breathing life ....to eat, work and sleep Sowing wispy thoughts ...for dreams to reap. Desires and Cravings ..caged in Pandora's box. In torrid temptations....a Genie unlocks. Three Wishes!!..to escape into glorious world. Yearnings and Longings....an endless unfurled. A satiated soul....can it be my first wish? A desireless Buddha.. curb the greedy selfish. The acid of hatred, anger and anguish Can it dissolve into water?.my profound second wish. My last immortal wish?..to live on and on... Embedded in Beloved.. Unforgotten.. when I'm gone. 24th October 2018 Three Wishes Poetry Contest Sponsor Kevin Shaw PLACED FIRST IN CONTEST

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Harshita Chaudhary
Date: 11/12/2018 8:41:00 AM
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Very nice poem. Congratulations on your top win !
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Debjani Mitra
Date: 11/13/2018 10:30:00 AM
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Thanks Harshita..
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John Lawless
Date: 11/10/2018 8:26:00 AM
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...."a desireless Buddha"... love that phrase. Congrats on your placement
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Debjani Mitra
Date: 11/10/2018 8:54:00 PM
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Thanks John..
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 10/31/2018 1:47:00 AM
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This poem is simply stunning in content and expression Debiani! A worthy winning Trophy my friend! Congratulations! : )
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Debjani Mitra
Date: 10/31/2018 2:08:00 AM
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Hi Connie.. such a stunning applause too... thanks dear .
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Jp Thomas
Date: 10/30/2018 12:48:00 PM
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Congrats on your well deserved placing ; l
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Debjani Mitra
Date: 10/30/2018 10:11:00 PM
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Thanks for the encouraging words.
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 10/29/2018 12:14:00 PM
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BIG CONGRATS to win top. If you wish, you can soup mail me. Where do you stay?
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Debjani Mitra
Date: 10/29/2018 11:22:00 PM
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I have mailed you ...
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P.M. Richter
Date: 10/29/2018 8:47:00 AM
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Congratulations Debjani!
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Debjani Mitra
Date: 10/29/2018 9:05:00 AM
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Thanks P.M. ..
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Winged Warrior
Date: 10/29/2018 5:47:00 AM
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A winning wish...Congrats on your top trophy win Debjani...love & light...^WW^
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Debjani Mitra
Date: 10/29/2018 8:21:00 AM
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Thanks a lot ..I did wish to win of course..
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P.S. Awtry
Date: 10/28/2018 6:42:00 PM
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Congratulations on writing this beautiful poem and on your well-deserved 1st place honor!
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Debjani Mitra
Date: 10/28/2018 9:58:00 PM
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thanks dear friend for the visit and like
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/28/2018 6:09:00 PM
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Congrats on your gold medal win, Debjani. Well done.
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Debjani Mitra
Date: 10/28/2018 9:59:00 PM
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Thanks so much
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Charlie Smith
Date: 10/26/2018 9:53:00 AM
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No better wishes than these. We should all be hopeful to live on through our works...Best wishes in the contest,
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Debjani Mitra
Date: 10/28/2018 10:07:00 PM
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True.. there's no end to our wishes. Your good wishes worked. thanks a lot

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