Three Suns

I took a trip through the woods with nothing but faith on my side saw the sun for three days and the moon for two but i wasnt lost hunger and thirst ate at my side but the water i had, had to wait nature made me a home and kept me dry and warm all the night there were times i wanted to die thought i wouldnt make it out alive then something amazing happened water rushed through the next day but then I forgot why I started this miserable plan to find myself it wasnt till I met the men that greeted me back to this place I learned wisdom only comes when people get hurt and the great thing to do is not boast on yourself so I'll just take what i have learned and keep movin on and three suns will always remind me that I am strong no matter though cause i was never alone

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/9/2011 9:28:00 AM

Danny, hello! a deep walk in the woods. nature has its way to give and take. Also expose~ i think this walk was meant for one, because at times we fail to see what is really there. Wisdom is only 3 suns away. I want to thank you for sharing a lesson more than the moon. And that strnght is found in ones blindness... you have a great day,..Linda

Danny Sosa
Date: 6/11/2011 1:40:00 PM

thank u linda for your comment i = this is a true story though of me and God if u notice the last line "i was never alone"