Jenish Somadas Poet Senryu

Three Senryus

Fever :-
pale trembling body
mind leaking flames of fire -
love fever conquered




Break-up :-
the springs of my eyes
glared my sight and in silence
he walked away.




Rich Man :-
in great penury
he twinkles in happiness –
rich man in disguise.


Won second place in STRAND SELECT 12 any form,any theme Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand

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Alkas Poetry January 22, 2020 at 4:18 AM Three smart senryu splendid written salute and congrat alkas Jenish Somadas January 22, 2020 at 4:58 AM Thank you Alkas for your kind words..

Brenda Chiri January 18, 2020 at 2:49 PM Congratulations on your win!;) Jenish Somadas January 19, 2020 at 4:58 AM Thank you Brenda..

Demetrios Trifiatis January 15, 2020 at 12:57 PM Three Pearl's of Senryu of superb beauty dearest, Jenish. . Hugs Jenish Somadas January 15, 2020 at 9:15 PM Your comments are a delight to read..Thank you..

Vijay Pandit January 15, 2020 at 7:35 AM Each one evokes a unique emotion and together they speak of life--well done, Jenish. Jenish Somadas January 15, 2020 at 7:42 AM Thank you Vijay for your time.. Comments from such a great poet is an inspiration..

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri January 15, 2020 at 12:57 AM Wow sublime bunch of senryus depicting swell. Kudos. Pls pleez do review/ comment my newest poem too. Jenish Somadas January 15, 2020 at 4:35 AM Thank you Zaynab.. Sure I will read..

Eve Roper January 15, 2020 at 12:32 AM Very nicely done, Jenish, I really like the last one. Jenish Somadas January 15, 2020 at 4:34 AM Thank you for liking it.. Have a great day..

Quoth Theraven January 14, 2020 at 11:25 PM Jenish, Very nice trio.... -Richard Jenish Somadas January 15, 2020 at 4:33 AM Thank you Richard...