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Three Senryus

Fever :- pale trembling body mind leaking flames of fire - love fever conquered Break-up :- the springs of my eyes glared my sight and in silence he walked away. Rich Man :- in great penury he twinkles in happiness – rich man in disguise. Won second place in STRAND SELECT 12 any form,any theme Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand

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Date: 1/22/2020 4:18:00 AM
Three smart senryu splendid written salute and congrat alkas
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/22/2020 4:58:00 AM
Thank you Alkas for your kind words..
Date: 1/18/2020 2:49:00 PM
Congratulations on your win!;)
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/19/2020 4:58:00 AM
Thank you Brenda..
Date: 1/15/2020 12:57:00 PM
Three Pearl's of Senryu of superb beauty dearest, Jenish. . Hugs
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/15/2020 9:15:00 PM
Your comments are a delight to read..Thank you..
Date: 1/15/2020 7:35:00 AM
Each one evokes a unique emotion and together they speak of life--well done, Jenish.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/15/2020 7:42:00 AM
Thank you Vijay for your time.. Comments from such a great poet is an inspiration..
Date: 1/15/2020 12:57:00 AM
Wow sublime bunch of senryus depicting swell. Kudos. Pls pleez do review/ comment my newest poem too.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/15/2020 4:35:00 AM
Thank you Zaynab.. Sure I will read..
Date: 1/15/2020 12:32:00 AM
Very nicely done, Jenish, I really like the last one.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/15/2020 4:34:00 AM
Thank you for liking it.. Have a great day..
Date: 1/14/2020 11:25:00 PM
Jenish, Very nice trio.... -Richard
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/15/2020 4:33:00 AM
Thank you Richard...

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