Three Seasons, One Word

Yellowing leaves, red hue
The bough empty pointing true
One bud in autumn

Flakes falling, ice crackling
Cold bed alone without you
Frost bite turning blue

Cherry bud blossoms
Rain dripping, hand holding hand
My fat cheeks blushing.
		
		Love?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Arteaga Avatar
August 10, 2009 at 3:24 PM
three haikus to make a grand haiku visionary dream, very lovely this is
Kendrick Avatar
August 10, 2009 at 2:52 PM
Very descriptive. I could feel the seasons change. Sara
Orozco Avatar
August 10, 2009 at 2:39 PM
Good form! This is an awesome piece!
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