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Three Legged Table

Wedding gift to me from my grandpa, was antique with an obvious flaw, a three legged table made of oak, made for him special and was bespoke. It was designed to be by fireside, was eight inches by eight inches wide, just about two and a half feet high, to keep him in winter warm and dry. polished in dark varnish to high gloss, etched in ivory he did emboss, the names from our whole family tree… somewhere on one of the legs was me. Said to me as only grandpa’s do, with tears on smiles, his face split in two, leave you this to remember me by, not let past love and memory die. with pride we placed it by our fireside, wife and I would spend time sat beside, that three legged piece of grand old oak, warmth of generations would evoke. Written 31st October 2023 9 syllables each line aabb rhyme Edward Ibeh sponsored This or that Vol 21 contest

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Date: 11/9/2023 8:10:00 PM
A flawed gift from grandpa but couldn't be more precious! What a wonderful story and poem, Krish:-) Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest.
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 11/9/2023 10:14:00 PM
Thanks Edward! delighted to be appreciated and recognised! Good day to you!
Date: 11/2/2023 12:59:00 PM
a lovely idea, the table as a precious heirloom from grandfather. WELL done.
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 11/2/2023 3:00:00 PM
Thanks Andrea!! Pleased to have your lovely words!
Date: 11/2/2023 11:21:00 AM
Krish! This table truly is a visible reminder of your special relationship with your grandfather! How wonderful that he crafted it with this own hands! You did a wonderful job telling this story with your flowing rhymes! Touched my heart with a smile. I have a footstool that belonged to my grandmother. Presently I am stitching a new cover for it from a needlepoint, l found in her hope chest! Best wishes for the contest. Have missed you! So glad you are back! Blessings!
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 11/2/2023 3:00:00 PM
Thanks Sam! Very kind words from you, indeed cheers me up!:) Good to hear you had a similar gift from your grandmother! These are precious things in life!! God bless!!

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