Three Keys

She wore them 'round her slender neck
Three ornate keys on chain of fine silver
She caught me gazing in their direction
and whispered in my ear, "Which one?"

Which key would I choose if given a choice?
Gold, the brightest, caught my eye first.
Would it open her heart to love only me,
or lock the door to keep us apart?

A silver key had become tarnished over time
but didn't detract from its shapely form.
Though not as beautiful as the young maid,
I wondered if it was the right key to her heart.

Smallest of them all was the one cast in bronze.
Her smile vanished when my hand reached out.
My fingers were warmed at the slightest touch
of the key that fell from the chain's broken clasp.

From her moist hazel eyes, rained tears of relief.
From her lips, the faint curve of a tender smile.
She placed a soft hand against my cheek and said,
"I've been waiting for you for such a long while."


7/19/2016
Three Keys Contest-John Lawless

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 7/23/2016 5:06:00 AM
Congrats Marti, for your placement with this wonderful piece!! ;-)
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Date: 7/22/2016 2:56:00 PM
Congrats well written great poem x
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Date: 7/21/2016 10:15:00 AM
Great write Marti! I must say this is one of your best! Congratulations and continue using the power of your words! :)
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Date: 7/20/2016 5:50:00 PM
Amazing metaphor in your poem, Marti. Congratulations on your nice placement in the contest. 7 Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 7/20/2016 5:11:00 PM
many congrats on your win Marti:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/20/2016 2:01:00 PM
A lovely metaphoric treatment of the shallowness of men and their inability to plum the depths of a woman's true beauty. Nice take on the theme. thanks for participating in the contest
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Date: 7/19/2016 7:28:00 AM
beautiful write!
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Date: 7/19/2016 7:00:00 AM
Very nice ... Enjoyed so much ...
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Date: 7/19/2016 6:37:00 AM
Marti this is a wonderful poem - it may not be gold but was the key to her heart - great tale and do drop by the collaboration poem you are in for a big surprise:-):-):-)
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