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Three Haiku

Haiku A fall rose alone Insipid pink and frozen Winter is coming Haiku Playing the fiddle Under a street lamp´s sorrow Residue of dreams Haiku Snow covered garden Plastic roses on the table Look obscene

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/11/2012 7:13:00 AM

I liked the stark imagery of the last one, Jan. And the middle one is really beautiful!

Jan Oskar Hansen
Date: 7/11/2012 10:56:00 AM

thank you Andrea

Marty Owens

Date: 7/11/2012 7:10:00 AM

Love these Haiku...enjoyed reading this morning....Marty

Jan Oskar Hansen
Date: 7/11/2012 10:56:00 AM

thank you Marty

Kathryn Collins

Date: 7/11/2012 6:51:00 AM

I love to start the morning with a cup of coffee and your latest poetry. All three haiku are splendid, especially the rose pieces. My mother was the only one to use the word insipid regularly. clue to my personality (well not that bad). love, Kathy

Jan Oskar Hansen
Date: 7/11/2012 10:57:00 AM

thank you Kathy