Robert Johnson Poet Rhyme

Three Different Lives

Empty clouds hung over head.
Filled up with all that's left for dead.
The door bell rang to go outside.
Reminding me, the things not tried.

The picture came in shades of new.
Filled my heart with all that's true.
A future with such hopes and dreams.
Beautiful, yet not all it seems.

You, me and ours, among the stars.
A marriage on earth of Venus and Mars.
Yet, someone's calling from beyond.
To change the galaxy with their wand.

Time changed in this cosmic dream.
Mars got lost on a moon beam.
And Venus hides behind the sun.
Awaits tomorrow, when they'll be one.

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Donna Jones February 7, 2013 at 4:47 PM I hope your future of hopes and dreams are still coming true

Poet Destroyer A February 6, 2013 at 6:50 PM Hello Robert, wow.... love the line.. time changed in this cosmic dream"" love all 3 lives..always~ Linda

Andrea Dietrich February 6, 2013 at 12:13 AM hey come on, it's been a month now. YOu gotta put up a new poem for me to respond to!! by the way I loved your comments to me. Did you see the poem someone was inspired to write because of your comments to them. It was very nice one but I can't remember who the poet woman was right now.

Harry Horsman February 5, 2013 at 10:04 AM this is amazing poetry robert,,,

Vesna Kovrlija February 5, 2013 at 12:30 AM Great write!

Elizabeth Wesley January 28, 2013 at 9:06 PM You sure can weave a sweet dream; you've got that night sky glowing with the goddess of beauty and the god of war creating a wonder of sweet magic. How I love that last verse, clever and oh so enigmatic! Love, Lizzy

Andrea Dietrich January 24, 2013 at 4:36 PM Hey I really enjoyed your queery query. Would you mind if I added it to my list? or maybe I better just stick to what's already there. haha. Really though, that was great: gay question!!!

Andrea Dietrich January 22, 2013 at 10:57 PM thanks for your recent beautifully rhymed comments, my friend.

Sukmawati Komala January 21, 2013 at 9:08 PM Helo my great poet Robert...very impressive write..i enjoy read this morning.. thank you for sharing your brilliant thought <3

Debra Squyres January 17, 2013 at 6:28 PM Time to post something new !!! Here is the comment he posted that I wanted you to post as a poem..as is or added too. “So many times we lose the fight to capture thoughts that we don't write. Dawning dreams of magic dust We breathe it in, it turns to rust. An avalanche of slumber snow. Covers up what we no longer know.”…. by: Robert Johnson in a comment Debra Squyres January 17, 2013 at 6:30 PM I think it is good as it...you leave so many cute little poems on the soup members poems. As one souper to another souper...thank you !!

Andrea Dietrich January 16, 2013 at 2:57 PM Just coming here to say hello, Robert!

Debra Squyres January 16, 2013 at 2:51 PM Soup mail back...and I want to see it on your page lickidy split !!! It's about your comment under my "Visions Sight" Go now !!!!

Jack Horne January 13, 2013 at 2:35 PM lovely write, my friend

Andrea Dietrich January 9, 2013 at 10:06 PM robert, I see you inspired a dreamy poem from a poetess here. I think it was Debra S! Debra Squyres January 17, 2013 at 6:25 PM Andrea...he posts those comment with rhyme and sometimes he needs to just post them on his page as a poem !!! But indeed I did take a comment of his, change it very little and added to it... He is a talented poet and wish he'd post more often..though he is limited by his time on computer.

Andrea Dietrich January 8, 2013 at 7:54 PM dreamy, lovely but so sad, Robert. I really like how you crafted this one. Robert Johnson January 9, 2013 at 3:35 PM Thanks!:)

Debra Squyres January 8, 2013 at 1:40 PM This is quite lovely !! To dream of love...what more can we do? lol May Venus and Mars find their way back together !! Tomorrows are always possible !!