Three Cheers For Poetry Soup

My friends on P-Soup are loyal and true Every morning I rush to my computer To read all their happy upbeat comments And suddenly the sun breaks through the clouds At times, I must admit I have thought of leaving When everyday trials cloud my vision But then I quickly come to my senses I would certainly have withdrawal sysmtoms Similar to those folks abstaining from alcohol I would have to join “P-Soup Anonymous” for help To get me through the difficult and trying times Without the aid of friends and family I'd be a broken man aimlessly wandering the streets As I sit here writing, I am convinced This will never ever come to pass Alright, I'll admit it... I'm obsessed There! I feel much better now Admitting I have a problem is half the battle So it seems I'll be here for the foreseeaable future Thank you all my dear friends And three cheers for Poetry Soup! © Jack Ellison 2014

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Date: 9/24/2014 11:46:00 AM
Three Cheers for Jack! I run here first thing every day to read your stuff! I've been slow this week while painting around the front door a pretty deep blue trim color. Dragon's been helping and you know how he can slow things down! But I must say, That color does look nice on him! If he keeps spilling my paint every where. I may have to repaint the front of the house, again! And that pretty white column I finished painting? Think I might just call those blue streaks converstaional pieces. LOL
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Jack Ellison
Date: 9/24/2014 4:24:00 PM
You are sooo sweet my dear loyal friend! Everybody needs a friend like you... huggsies XOX
Date: 9/23/2014 11:36:00 AM
Lol, you'd better! You're not very far from us. We'll hunt you down lol. Just kidding :) Love ya, dear old friend!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 9/23/2014 3:55:00 PM
You are terrifying me my friend! I really promise I won't leave! LOL Huggsies XXX
Date: 9/23/2014 11:28:00 AM
Yes three cheers! N then four five n six cheers! Wonderful write Jack! I too m obsessed wid this soup,, n my soupy friends ! Don't u ever think of leaving here!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 9/23/2014 4:02:00 PM
What can I say... youse guys are the "cream in my coffee"... the "icing on my cake" LOL Love youse both! XX
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/23/2014 11:29:00 AM
see we even post at the exact same time LOL Hugs Jan xxx
Date: 9/23/2014 11:28:00 AM
wonderful tribute to friends here Jack on soup - I feel like it's an extended family:-) hugs Jan xxx
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Jack Ellison
Date: 9/23/2014 3:57:00 PM
With friends like you guys, what else could I ask for??? WOOHOO! Thanks guys! Huggsies, Jack XOXOX
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 9/23/2014 11:34:00 AM
Yes Jan I know! That's best friends,, n telepathy!
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