Three Blinks

Only three blinks and life is through
The soul whisper spoke, at once I knew,
Three blinks left of life for me
When senses and breath and pulse all flee.

The masks, the smoke, the facades all run,
Hunting another’s vain welcome,
Clarity flashes and time reigns in
Death is ringing, I am drawn to greet him.

(Count to three)
Blink
(Count to three)


Oh my life! What have I done?
All turns grey and I have no one.
Icy fear blankets my being
Life is history, death the beginning.

What am I leaving? Where am I going?
Why did I not think he would be showing?
When did I suppose life would be ending?
How is it now that death is winning?

(Count to three)
Blink
(Count to three)

The end is lingering, oh so near
I cry out…Can anyone hear?
Straining to stare through eyes of tears
My life was a blink…..All those years!!

Grey goes black and ice moves in,
My life! My life! Oh to live again!
But no second chance now, no reprieve.
Soul sheds flesh as the latter heaves.

(Count to three)
Blink
(Count to three)

Now no breath, now no beating,
Now no senses, I cease being.
Now the beginning, realms past the brink,
My mark, my legacy, gone in a blink.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 1/4/2010 9:32:00 AM
Wow. Such an inspirational poem. Keep the pen going. -Daniel
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Date: 12/31/2009 3:25:00 PM
~~Jack~~Now you are winding down your year (2009 ) of sharing your amazing poetry with us here at PoetrySoup. As you begin your New Year (2010 ) I wish you the best with your writing endeavors whatever they may be. I wish you good health, all the love your heart can take and peace in your life. Love and blessings to you and yours now and always, Carol
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Date: 12/31/2009 7:28:00 AM
It comes just that quick....Very dark yet uplifting write here Jack...Keep the ink flowing. God Bless and Happy New Year...Taz
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