Three At Sea

Tears there were none till they were two Tower of cloud invited them to its peak Putting balloons of light on their shoe They would go on trips indeed unique Enters the third to make a triangle Poison steps in the mutual apple The sky is hit and clouds mangled Wrinkles creep in the colored maple Dance looked lovely in the sleek one liner Of one hundred and eighty degree The triangle raises storms in three corners Towards hospital walks the oak tree ______________________________________________ July 28, 2016 Three Stanzas –Three Only – Poetry Contest Sponsor: Broken Wings
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August 2, 2016 at 5:12 AM
Amazing look at a triangle. Beautiful serenity.
Gupta Avatar
August 2, 2016 at 8:05 AM
Thank you ...
Scott Avatar
July 31, 2016 at 9:39 AM
Nice write. Good luck in the contest Probir
Gupta Avatar
August 1, 2016 at 12:16 AM
Thank you ...
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July 29, 2016 at 5:43 AM
Delightfully done dear, Probir! Good luck my friend!
Gupta Avatar
July 29, 2016 at 5:50 AM
Thank you ... Regards ...
Medders Tobechi Avatar
July 28, 2016 at 10:41 PM
A lot is happening,,,,,great imagery. Good luck in the contest....looks like a winner
Gupta Avatar
July 29, 2016 at 12:53 AM
Thank you ... But what looks nice to one/may be ordinary to the other/ In case it is an eye to eye/Of course will smile your sky ...
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