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Three At Sea

Tears there were none till they were two Tower of cloud invited them to its peak Putting balloons of light on their shoe They would go on trips indeed unique Enters the third to make a triangle Poison steps in the mutual apple The sky is hit and clouds mangled Wrinkles creep in the colored maple Dance looked lovely in the sleek one liner Of one hundred and eighty degree The triangle raises storms in three corners Towards hospital walks the oak tree ______________________________________________ July 28, 2016 Three Stanzas –Three Only – Poetry Contest Sponsor: Broken Wings

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Date: 8/2/2016 5:12:00 AM
Amazing look at a triangle. Beautiful serenity.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 8/2/2016 8:05:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 7/31/2016 9:39:00 AM
Nice write. Good luck in the contest Probir
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Probir Gupta
Date: 8/1/2016 12:16:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 7/29/2016 5:43:00 AM
Delightfully done dear, Probir! Good luck my friend!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 7/29/2016 5:50:00 AM
Thank you ... Regards ...
Date: 7/28/2016 10:41:00 PM
A lot is happening,,,,,great imagery. Good luck in the contest....looks like a winner
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Probir Gupta
Date: 7/29/2016 12:53:00 AM
Thank you ... But what looks nice to one/may be ordinary to the other/ In case it is an eye to eye/Of course will smile your sky ...

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