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Threadbare

“Your mother’s love, the silent devotion ,the never heard prayers, the unseen  care.” ~~ Shobhna Kanwar~~ 

She stood in the foyer of the church, through the window to the aisle.
Her threadbare clothes hung around her form in denial.
She watched him take her arm, as they approached the groom.
A hush was heard as the organ played in the room.

How stunning the bridesmaids, four beautiful girls, 
The bride exquisite, her delicate lace gown studded with pearls.
The crowd were obviously all well to do,
Men in Versace suits, women clad in Channel and Dior too.

She listened as they said their vows and swore to be true.
She smiled as he proclaimed to his bride “I love you”.
Marriage complete, they would all soon walk out to the street.
It was time for the hagged woman to make a hasty retreat.

He glanced at her but didn’t raise an eyebrow.
She would never be recognized the way she looked now.
It was so long since she had cried, she shed just one tear.
Her dear daughter would never know that her mother was here.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Blodgett Avatar
March 17, 2024 at 10:25 AM
There is noting I find more compelling than poetic irony. This does indeed grab at our gut and tugs the heart with its magic. Health and Happiness Lonna
Volumes Avatar
March 17, 2024 at 5:56 PM
Thank you so very much Lonna.
Goldsmith Avatar
March 15, 2024 at 10:04 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your sad yet wonderful "Threadbare" write. Great pictures with a Great ending. I love this one... Have a blessed day/weekend writing away.................
Volumes Avatar
March 15, 2024 at 5:15 PM
Thank you so much dear Paula
De Beaulieu Avatar
March 8, 2024 at 11:24 AM
Hello speaks volumes, i feel sorry for the mother that hid during her daughter's wedding. my friend. enjoy your day. /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
March 12, 2024 at 11:08 AM
Hello Speaks Volumes, You are welcome. enjoy your day my friend. Hugs. /Darlene/
Volumes Avatar
March 8, 2024 at 6:57 PM
Thank you so very much.. Wen
Narain Avatar
March 8, 2024 at 10:37 AM
Emotional poem, full of joy and mother's love.
Volumes Avatar
March 8, 2024 at 6:57 PM
Thank you so very much.. Wen
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