Thread of Time

Upon a single thread time is moving The lone thread represents me The display of life shown
Russell Sivey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Dietrich Avatar
February 2, 2012 at 10:51 PM
Yes, we are all getting "thread-worn" too. GREAT analogy to us mere mortals. Good luck in the contest and goodnight now, Russell.
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February 2, 2012 at 10:12 PM
Russell... it has been a long day for me... a very interesting kimo... sand and rope.. is my life... enjoyed..pd
Johnson Avatar
February 2, 2012 at 9:01 PM
thread keeps onward, old mate, dude, till the fates snipping interlude, forshortens wit... dats it... concludes... by a dummy, shrewd. Don ... thanks to Russells "Thread of Time"
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February 2, 2012 at 1:08 PM
Enjoyed reading your creative work..Sara
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