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Thoughts On the Floor

Spiders on my bedroom floor Shadows knocking at my door A thousand eyes upon me And still no light in sight. Shadows follow me Like the voices in my head Like a boot weighed down with lead. Men fall victim to strife Dreaming of a different life Before I say goodbye Remember me the way I am.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/2/2009 4:33:00 AM
Good morning Skyy. I enjoyed reading your poem. Your poetry is very interesting and written very well. You might want to check out the forms of poetry here on site and list a form on your poems. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/1/2009 4:01:00 PM
Very descriptive. Sara
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