Thoughts On I40

2 miles a minute
A thousand thoughts a second 
Everything seems so slow
But these wheels keep pushing, I40 go
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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March 15, 2009 at 8:27 AM
Got a chuckle out of this one. One could interpret this in different ways, an asset for a concise poem. Enjoyed it. Karen
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March 11, 2009 at 4:08 AM
I can hear the wheels burning..
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March 10, 2009 at 11:26 PM
140 you went... nhuh?!?... love the simpleness to the piece! ~ Arany
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