Thoughts On Being a Woman

I dreamt I was a woman, in a room full 
of men, a waiting or a service room, or 
perhaps a course on zen?

I really do not know, or wonder why or 
when, but waiting there amid the gloom 
was me and all these men

A shy man in a tall green suit, one time
he glanced my way, but all the rest in
morning dress, fixed their eyes my way

My chest and bum their main concern,
it made me feel quite strange; as they 
dribbled down their spiky chins, like 
cowboys on the range

And here and there a whisper heard,  “Corr!”
and “Look at that!”…while topics of anatomy 
flew round the room a bat

I felt so bad when in this dream, a woman 
it did seem, she takes the weight of life’s hard
scene, male voices so obscene

So here’s a message to us men, myself  I here 
include, would you a son want men so crude,
to mother, be so rude?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Chuan Seng Avatar
October 13, 2015 at 7:08 PM
Great imagery in these lines... Perfectly phrased in every line... And a message so clear for all men... How would a mother accept any man... If crude describes him to a man?
Muideen Avatar
October 8, 2015 at 7:03 AM
Lol!!! The flow of your wonderful write depicted imagery that make the readers to inhale is beautiful scent and intoxicated their mind, this makes your excellent and funny piece to met with their love and like..... a fascinating write..........A.M.
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