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Thoughts of You

Thoughts of you Shades of maple, shades of elm, along a winding wishing stream Of lily pad and cattail smiles a’ glistening in rippled gleam So soft the grass upon the hill, where bluebirds sing their melodies Harmonically with skies of blue in perfect midday symphonies It’s here amidst the air so free I take this lazy afternoon To think about the one I love where precious wildflowers bloom For this you see is what I dream, someday the two of us shall share Watching clouds across the sky, spending time with little care Seeing butterflies at play as branches flow in whispered dance Shadows tickling the ground alone within a sweet romance Until that time does come to pass, desired dreams have all come true Among this beauty I will rest, lost within my thoughts of you

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Date: 4/27/2017 4:33:00 PM
Hi Chris!:)Very beautifully penned, romantic, sweet n' passionate love poem Chris!:) I truly enjoyed reading this one again from you.A 7 +! A fav too. And thank so much for sharing!:) For sure I'll return to your pages and continue reading more of your very beautiful poetry, my friend Chris:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend! In his light God bless you always!:)) D.
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Chris Green
Date: 4/27/2017 4:42:00 PM
Thank you again. I appreciate you visiting my work and leaving such kind thoughts for me.
Date: 3/21/2017 5:55:00 PM
Your poem floats along with such an elegant ease, Chris. The imagery and soft romantic tone is especially well done! Love it :)
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Chris Green
Date: 3/22/2017 10:16:00 AM
Thank you so very much Laura. I am happy you liked this one
Date: 3/21/2017 3:35:00 PM
"For this you see is what I dream, // someday the two of us shall share // Watching clouds across the sky, // spending time with little care" // That is my dream too, that one day I will be united with the one I love, and that we can lie there in the grass, together, watching clouds in the sky. Thank you for a wonderful poem, my friend :)
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Chris Green
Date: 3/21/2017 3:42:00 PM
Thanks so much my good friend, I hope that dream comes true for you.
Date: 3/21/2017 3:24:00 PM
Simply lovely my friend...your words are breathtaking and so very gentle.They remind me of a beautiful country day.Thank you for sharing your lovely hearts words darlin' friend. A '7' for sure.Big country hugs and smiles to you...Mary :)
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Chris Green
Date: 3/21/2017 3:35:00 PM
Thank you so very much Mary for your kind and encouraging comments on my poem. I am more than thrilled you enjoyed this one.
Date: 3/21/2017 3:10:00 PM
You deserve to have all you wish for...I wish I was a fairy and had a magix wand..The last wish I would grant is to give you this...Such a beautiful poem.. indeed it is.
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Chris Green
Date: 3/21/2017 3:16:00 PM
You can spell it any way you like my sweet friend, because your kind comments are always magic to me.
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 3/21/2017 3:10:00 PM
Magic..NOT MAGIX :)
Date: 3/21/2017 2:49:00 PM
sweet passion glows on this page.. i am enticed, chris!.. beautiful.. huggs
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Chris Green
Date: 3/21/2017 3:15:00 PM
Thank you so very much Nette
Date: 3/21/2017 2:48:00 PM
Sounds like a perfect day , relaxing, dreaming, beautifully written :)
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Chris Green
Date: 3/21/2017 3:15:00 PM
Thank you so very much my sweet friend.
Date: 3/21/2017 2:16:00 PM
What a lovely scene of a blissful afternoon with the one you love. So dreamy, you are a master craftsman of love in nature.:-) Superb writing Chris :-) a fave, 7+ blessings, lynn
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Chris Green
Date: 3/21/2017 3:14:00 PM
Thank you Lynn, you are always too kind to me. I appreciate your time and your encouraging comments.
Date: 3/21/2017 2:08:00 PM
Sounds like a lovely way to spend an afternoon.
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Chris Green
Date: 3/21/2017 3:14:00 PM
Thanks Tim, I'd know if I wasn't at work. : )
Date: 3/21/2017 1:31:00 PM
So lovely! Sounds romantic and relaxing :)
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Chris Green
Date: 3/21/2017 2:03:00 PM
Thank you so very much Kim.
Date: 3/21/2017 12:56:00 PM
Romance flows from you like rivers to the sea :)
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 3/21/2017 1:29:00 PM
...oh ya can't fake that stuff! Awesomeness Chris, may that pen never stop. xomo!
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Chris Green
Date: 3/21/2017 1:17:00 PM
Thank you Maureen, it just seems to come out that way. :)

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